These are really fun designs! I especially like the sea creature one, it has a nice silhouette. One thing I would say that you could improve would be the rendering in the cat creature. Just pay more careful attention to where to put the texture and how to paint it in with what you already have to make it look more natural, right now it looks a bit random. That is just a small thing that you could probably fix up quickly! Good job, I love these!
These are way good. I like how the top one is lit. And the silhouette/gesture reads super well. Maybe soften up some of the edges and give a little more form the the right leg in the foreground.
"Looks like a million bucks," as Oaky would say. One suggestion would be to make the shadows on the rest of the body match the shadows on the face, which seem to be a lot stronger. Also, the bottom one looks a lot like Lapras, which is AWESOME.
I love these Ky! I really love the turtle one. You should definitely color that one too. The top one is great as well. It seems a little 2D right now, so I'd give it some more rounded shadowing and I think some rim lighting would really help as well. Great job!
Wooo Ky! These are looking nice! I like that you used textures in the top one. I'm not sure what your reference was, but the anatomy is good from a linear standpoint! Maybe think a bit more about how the light comes around his body, particularly around the tail. I think the whole tail might be in some type of shadow, but that's just how I interpret the pose.
P.S. your lineart on the bottom one is really nice!
These are really fun designs! I especially like the sea creature one, it has a nice silhouette. One thing I would say that you could improve would be the rendering in the cat creature. Just pay more careful attention to where to put the texture and how to paint it in with what you already have to make it look more natural, right now it looks a bit random. That is just a small thing that you could probably fix up quickly! Good job, I love these!
ReplyDeleteThese are way good. I like how the top one is lit. And the silhouette/gesture reads super well. Maybe soften up some of the edges and give a little more form the the right leg in the foreground.
ReplyDelete"Looks like a million bucks," as Oaky would say. One suggestion would be to make the shadows on the rest of the body match the shadows on the face, which seem to be a lot stronger. Also, the bottom one looks a lot like Lapras, which is AWESOME.
ReplyDeleteI love these Ky! I really love the turtle one. You should definitely color that one too. The top one is great as well. It seems a little 2D right now, so I'd give it some more rounded shadowing and I think some rim lighting would really help as well. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWooo Ky! These are looking nice! I like that you used textures in the top one. I'm not sure what your reference was, but the anatomy is good from a linear standpoint! Maybe think a bit more about how the light comes around his body, particularly around the tail. I think the whole tail might be in some type of shadow, but that's just how I interpret the pose.
ReplyDeleteP.S. your lineart on the bottom one is really nice!
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