I'm just gonna say this, the fish creature looks like male genitals. In the draw-over I tried describe more of the anatomy and change the cheekballs into those punching arms from a mantis shrimp. Also tried to base the tail off a beta fish.
Reference elephant (or dinosaur, or both) anatomy just a little more. Also, the pattern going down its neck is really interesting, but to me it feels too small and light. If you want it to be subtle, that's fine but I think you could exaggerate it more.
The banner from the back reminded me of a samurai, plus I remembered you did a kinda Asian-looking character earlier...so I reference a shiba-inu dog and a Buddhist lion. Also tried to make the legs a little longer and more anatomical.
The character's cool, but I'm not sure what his personality is. I thought he might be a brute, so for #1 I made him beefier. I thought maybe you meant for him to be kinda derpy, so for #2 all I did was try to get rid of some of the definition in his chest. Almost a singular moob kinda thing.
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